CAMBRIDGE ENGLISH IELTS 6
TEST 1
WRITING
WRITING
TASK 1
WRITING TASK 2
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ANSWER KEY
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Answer
Writing task 1
The line graph delineates how the vehicle preferences of British changed over the time by comparing the average distance an English travelled using different modes of carriers in 1985 and 2000. Overall, cars were British citizen’s primary mode of transportation and taxi was the least used mode of travel for them.
As the data suggests, an English travelled
more than 6400 miles on an average in a year which was almost 36% higher than
the distance an average Brit travelled in 1985. Car use predominated this
total travel as more than 4800 miles out of 6400 in 2000 were crossed using
automobiles and a similar trend was seen in 1985. Use of personal cars in
truth increased over the time, as the data outlines. Reliance on buses was
higher than train and bicycle use and despite an average 255 miles walking by
a Brit in 1985, it decreased after 15 years.
Taxi was perhaps the least preferred
mode of commuting as only 13 miles were travelled by a British using it in
1985 which, despite an increase in 2000, was ignorable. Train travel hiked in
2000 while distance travelled by British in local buses dropped. All other
transportations contributed to 585 miles of travel by a Brit in 2000, an
increase than that of 1985.
Writing
task 2
As a result of constant media
attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and
celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries. Just like movie
stars, they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and cars.
Many people find their rewards unfair,
especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or
research scientists or even leading politicians who have the responsibility
of governing the country. However, sports salaries are not determined by considering
the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he
or she holds. Instead, they reflect the public popularity of the sport in
general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate.
So the notion of ‘fairness’ is not the issue.
Those who feel that sports stars’
salaries are justified might argue that the numbers of professionals with
real talent are very few, and the money is recognition of the skills and
dedication a person needs to be successful. Competition is constant and a
player is tested every time they perform in their relatively short career.
The pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out of the
spotlight. There is a huge number of sports persons compared to those who have
become successful and having a huge salary. It takes lots of practice, skills
and time to become a sports icon. Again Sports personality like Sachin
Tendulkar, Tiger Woods, Shane Warne inspires the new generation to be
attracted to the games they play. So
all of these factors may justify the huge earnings of the sports personality.
The first reason why I think that such
high salary is deserved by famous athletes and entertainers because we all
need them. Entertainment plays an essential role in our everyday's life. We
need to relax, watching TV with our favourite TV stars or favourite football
players. Entertainment is one of the best ways to eliminate stress and
tension and leave all troubles behind. For example, I can not stay home all
day long without watching TV. So, basically, I believe that famous athletes
and entertainers have such high salaries because we need them. They like
doctors for our minds and soles. Scientists say that people usually spend the
same amount of money for their food and entertainment. I think this fact
tells a lot.
The second reason for this is that
famous athletes have to work hard in order to get good results. I am sure
that achievements they make are the result of hard work, persistence and
pain. They sometimes risk their lives and health. For example, I am a big fan
of L. Amstrong, the most famous cyclist in world's history. He faced
probably, the most challenging difficulty in his life, cancer. He was very
young for this disease. Amstrong was in his early twenties when he found out
about it. I read a book about his life, and what impressed me were his words
after his victory in France. He said: "Cancer was the best thing that
ever happened to me ". He defeated the disease only because he believed
in himself and did not give up. I think such person deserves to have a high
salary and be loved by many people throughout the world.
Personally, I think that the amount of
money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of
movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more
value on the sport than on the essential professions and achievements.
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