Word choice errors involve the
incorrect use of one word in place of another. These two words may be related
forms (other and another, for example) or they may be
completely different (do and make, for example).
Descriptions of some of the most common
word choice errors are given below.
WRONG CHOICE OF MAKE OR DO
The verb to do is often used in
place of to make, and to make in place of to do. In its
basic sense, to make means to produce, to create, and to
construct, whereas to do means to perform, to act, and to accomplish.
These verbs are also used in a number of set expressions:
Common Expressions with Make
make a
comparison
make a
contribution
make a decision
make a distinction
make advances
in
make a forecast
make a law
make an attempt
make an
investment
make an offer
make a plan
make a point
make a
prediction
make a profit
make a promise
make a
sound/noise
make a
suggestion
be made of (= be composed of)
make up (= compose)
To make is also used in
this pattern: make + someone + adjective (The gift made her
happy.)
Common Expressions with Do
do a job
(errand, chore)
do an
assignment
do business
with
do one’s duty
do one’s work
do research
do someone a favour
The auxiliary verb do is used rather
than repeat main verbs: (My computer doesn’t operate as fast as theirs does.)
Anytime you see the verb make or
do underlined in the Structure section, suspect a word choice error.
Sample
Items
Cement is done (A) from varying (B) amounts (C) of limestone,
clay, and (D) gypsum.
The
correct answer is (A). The verb done is incorrect in this sentence. The correct word choice is made.
Small town newspapers (A) often urge (B) readers to make business (C) with local (D) merchants.
The
correct answer is (C). The phrase should read do business with.
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WRONG CHOICE OF SO, SUCH, TOO, AND AS
The words so, such, and too
are used in the following patterns:
so + adjective + that
clause
These boxes are
so heavy that we can’t lift them.
(So is
also used with many . . . that and much . . . that.)
There were so
many people in the auditorium that we could barely get in the front door.
such + adjective +
noun + that clause
It was such a
pretty view that he took a photograph.
too + adjective +
infinitive
It’s too cold
to go swimming today.
Notice that so and such are
both followed by that clauses, but too is followed by an
infinitive.
The words as and so are
also sometimes confused:
* Jane did so
well as I did on the economics exam. (INCORRECT)
* The coffee
was as hot that I couldn’t drink it. (INCORRECT)
In the first sentence, the word as should
be used in place of so; in the second, so should be used in
place of as. Also, look for so much or too much used in
place of so or too.
Sample
Items
The (A) sun is so (B) bright to look at (C) directly (D).
The
correct answer is (B). The correct pattern too + adjective + infinitive.
In much (A) of Alaska, the growing (B) season is as (C)short that crops
(D) can’t be raised.
The
correct answer is (C). The correct pattern is so +
adjective + that clause.
The giant
squid is so (A) an
elusive animal that at one time
(B) it was believed (C) to
be purely (D) mythical.
The
correct answer is (A). Before an adjective + noun + that clause, the word such should be used.
The mineral (A) grains in basalt
are so much (B) small
that they (C) cannot be seen (D) with the unaided
eye.
The
correct answer is (B). The phrase should read so small rather than so much small.
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WRONG CHOICE OF ANOTHER
OR OTHER
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Another
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Other
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Used as an adjective
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another + singular
noun
(Have another sandwich.)
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other + plural noun
(I wonder if there is life on other
planets.)
determiner + other +
noun (There may be life on some other planets.)
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Used as a pronoun
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another
(Thanks. I’ll have another.)
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determiner + other
(“I have one book.” “I have
the other.”)
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Another means “one
more, an additional one.” It can be used as an adjective before a singular
noun or alone as a pronoun. For example:
He needs another
piece of paper.
I have one
class in that building and another in the building across the
quadrangle.
Other is used as an
adjective before a plural noun. It is also used as an adjective before a
singular noun when preceded by a determiner such as the, some, any,
one, no, and so on. It can also be used alone as a pronoun when
preceded by a determiner. For example:
There are other
matters I’d like to discuss with you.
One of the
books was a novel; the other was a collection of essays.
There’s no other
place I’d rather visit.
Sample
Items
Willa Cather is known (A) for My Antonia and another (B) novels of
the (C) American frontier
(D).
The
correct answer is (B). Before a plural noun, other must be used.
An (A) understudy
is an actor who can (B) substitute
for other (C) actor in case of (D) an emergency.
The
correct answer is (C). Other is used incorrectly in place
of another before a singular noun.
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WRONG CHOICE OF BECAUSE OR BECAUSE OF,
IN SPITE OF/DESPITE OR ALTHOUGH,
AND DURING OR WHEN/WHILE
Certain expressions, such as because, are adverb-clause markers and
are used only before clauses. Other expressions, such as because of, are prepositions and are used before noun phrases or
pronouns.
Adverb-clause Markers
(Used with Clauses)
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Prepositions
(Used with Noun Phrases)
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because
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because of
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although
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despite
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when
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in spite of
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while
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during
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Sample
Items
Because migration (A) to the suburbs, the population (B) of many (C) large
American cities declined
(D) between 1950 and 1960.
The
correct answer is (A). Before a noun phrase (migration), the
preposition because of must be used.
Despite (A) most
people consider (B) the
tomato a vegetable, botanists classify
(C) it as a fruit (D).
The
correct answer is (A). Before a full clause (most people consider the tomato a vegetable), the adverb marker although must be used.
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WRONG CHOICE OF MUCH
OR MANY AND
SIMILAR EXPRESSIONS
Certain expressions can only be used in
phrases with plural nouns; others can be used in expressions only with
uncountable nouns.
Used with
Plural Nouns
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Used with
Uncountable Nouns
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Many
few, a few
fewer, the
fewest
number
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much
little, a
little
less, the
least
amount
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Sample
Items
Pearls are found (A) in much (B) colors, including (C) cream, blue (D), lavender, and
black.
The
correct answer is (B). Many must be used with a plural
noun (colors).
Even during (A) economic (B) booms, there is
a small number (C) of unemployment (D).
The
correct answer is (C). The word amount must be used to refer
to an uncountable noun such as unemployment.
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OTHER WORD FORM PROBLEMS
Other pairs of words are sometimes
confused in written expression, including those listed below. (Note: If one
of the words appears in italics,
that word is generally used incorrectly in Structure sentences; the other word
is the correction for the error.) All of the sentences with asterisks are
examples of errors and are INCORRECT.
no
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Used as an adjective before
nouns; means “not any”; also used in the expression no longer.
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not
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Used to make all other words
negative
Not gasoline was
left in the tank.
This is no the station
I usually listen to.
I not longer listen to
that station.
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most
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Used in superlative adjective
phrases; also used to mean “the majority”
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almost
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Used as an adverb to mean
“nearly”
This is the almost interesting
chapter in the book.
I’ve read almost of the
chapters in the book.
I’ve solved most all of
the problems in the book.
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twice
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Used as an adjective to mean
“two times”
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double
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Used as an adjective to mean
“make twice as large”
Henry has double as
much money as he did before he invested it.
Henry twice his money.
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earliest
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Used as a superlative
adjective to mean “most distant in time”
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soonest
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Used as a superlative adverb
to mean “most promptly”
These are the soonest examples of the artist’s
works.
(You will probably not see earliest used incorrectly in place
of soonest.)
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percent
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Used after a number
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percentage
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Not used after a number
Fifty percentage of the
people voted in favor of the initiative.
The percent of people
who approve of the initiative has been steadily growing.
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after
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Used as a preposition before a
noun or as an adverb-clause marker before a clause
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afterward
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Used as an adverb, means
“after that”
We’ll go to dinner afterward
the play.
We’ll go to dinner afterward
the play is over.
First the performer played the
guitar and after she played the flute.
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ago
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Used to talk about a time
earlier than the present
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before
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Used to talk about a time
earlier than some other point in time
Harold won a gold medal in the
Olympics last year, and four years ago that, he won a silver medal.
(You will probably not see before used incorrectly in place of ago.)
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tell
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Used with an object; also used
in certain set expressions: tell a story, tell the truth, tell
a secret
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say
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Used without an object
Mr. Hunter said us that
he had a good trip.
Joe said a wonderful
story.
Mr. Hunter told that
he’d had a good trip.
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ever
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Means “at any time”; used with
not to mean “never”; also used in some set expressions such as ever
since and hardly ever
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never
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Means “at no time”; not used
with a negative word
He hardly never goes to
that club.
(You will probably not see ever
used incorrectly in place of never.)
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alive
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Used after a verb
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live
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Used before a noun
Sue likes to have alive plants
in her apartment.
Although she forgot to water
it for a week, the plant was still live.
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around
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Used as a preposition to mean
“in a circular path”
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round
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Used as an adjective to mean
“circular in shape”
The new office building will
be an around glass tower.
(You will probably not see round
used incorrectly in place of around.)
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age
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Used as a noun, often in these
patterns: at the age of 21 and 21 years of age
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old
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Used as an adjective, often in
this pattern: 21 years old
Harriet will be 30 years age
next week.
Operators of motor vehicles
must be 30 years of old in this state.
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near
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Used as an adjective; means
“close to”
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nearly
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Used as an adverb; means
“almost”
Lynn is looking for an
apartment nearly the Medical Center.
The 2-bedroom apartment she looked
at cost near a $1,000 a month.
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some
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Used as a determiner before a
noun to mean “an indefinite amount”
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somewhat
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Used as an adverb to mean
“slightly”
This bicycle is some more
expensive than the one I looked at yesterday.
(You will probably not see somewhat
used incorrectly in place of some.)
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Note: The
distinctions between words such as desert and dessert, stationary
and stationery, capital and capitol, which are
really spelling problems, are NOT tested on the TOEFL test. (One reason is
that native speakers of English often make mistakes with these words!)
EXERCISE 19.1
Focus: Correctly
choosing between do and make
Directions: Underline the
word that correctly completes each sentence below.
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The tips of high-speed dental
drills are (done/made) of tungsten steel and often contain diamonds.
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2
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A cottage industry is a form
of manufacturing (done/made) at home.
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3
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Margaret Mead (did/made)
fundamental contributions to both the theory and fieldwork of anthropology.
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4
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Many universities receive
grants to (do/make) research for the federal government.
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5
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Research in genetics in the
early nineteenth century (did/made) much to improve agriculture.
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6
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Futurologists study current
trends to (do/make) predictions about the future.
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7
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Filmmaker George Lucas has
(done/made) many advances in the production of motion pictures, especially
in the use of special effects.
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8
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The distinction between
wildflowers and weeds is one that is often difficult to (do/make).
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EXERCISE 19.2
Focus: Correctly
choosing between so, such, too, and as
Directions: Underline the
word that correctly completes each sentence below.
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The mineral talc is (so/such)
soft that it can be scratched with a fingernail.
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2
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Oceanographers use robots and
unmanned submarines to explore parts of the ocean that are (so/too) deep
for people to explore safely.
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3
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(So/As) much paper money was
printed during the Revolutionary War that it became almost worthless.
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4
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The walking stick is an insect
with (so/such a) close resemblance to a twig that it escapes the notice of
its enemies.
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5
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At present, solar cells are
(so/too) expensive and inefficient to be used in the commercial generation of
electricity.
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6
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Acrylic plastics are very hard
and are (so/as) clear as glass.
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7
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Founded in 1682, Norfolk
developed (so/such a) prosperous sea trade that it quickly became the largest
town in the colony of Virginia.
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8
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Continental islands are (so/so
much) close to continents that their plant and animal life are identical to
life on the mainland.
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